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I don’t usually give 1 stars so I’ll give this a 3 stars (the art is nice)
For the plot, Tenned saw those kids getting killed..I hoped that he would do something since he’s a mercenary and Kaelis would listen to him only but nah….
He then proceeds to blame himself (which I don’t mind since you do owe some responsibility) and get mad at Kaelis which I was happy about….
But then…he sleeps with Kaelis?…wait HUH??? What!!! THIS LOST ME CAUSE THIS MAN JUST KILLED KIDS?! THE SAME KIDS THAT BRAIDED YOUR HAIR, welcomed you, gave you a tour, HAD FOOD WITH AND EVERYTHING UNDER THE SUN! And YOU JUST BRUSHED IT ASIDE???
This THREW ME ALL THE WAY OFF BECAUSE YOU DONT HAVE TO KILL KAELIS BUT YOU DIDNT EVEN LEAVE? Because the DIH IS GOOD AND YOU WANNA TO PRESERVE HIM??? What is happening?
This entire scene and chapter ruined this manhwa so fast because it was going so well to establish nothing. And I hate that this is a commonality with a lot of Yoai writers. The start good and when the scene is angst they just scrap any good ideas…like why write that scene if you knew he would still stay with Kaelis…and the fact Tenned still saw Kaelis as a child (after and during the scene where he was stroking his dih) is alsooooo veryyyy fucking weirddddd!
Anyways this was a mess :/
The author putting them on OZEMPIC