beta
•Too many female characters...I can sense a harem coming here
• Strong plot armor~
•A.Red.Head.Girl.....you know what I mean
•Poor character design (I'm not talking about the art)
•Weird plot
Maybe it's because I've read many novels and manhwas with great character design and writing that my standards became higher and I came notice some of this...
Well anyways, this is just my opinion. Read it if you want...
Btw, the art is good..I think it just improved my eyesight