beta
They had the opportunity to expand on so many things. I didn't really feel any chemistry between the fl and ml they had barely any interaction time to really have the readers see them fall in love with each other it kinda just happened. She still doesn't know about the reverse scale thing? It seemed like it had such deep meaning for it to just be brushed over. Absolutely no backgrounds were given for each character either I feel like all their stories could've been really interesting. There's whole world building potential and the reader was just thrown in the middle of it all it felt like.
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