This story would be better and everyone happier. The bottom could just tell people about his fantasies instead of expecting everyone to play along. Like some of the stuff seems hyper specific and he would just do better saying he wants to roleplay a lot and finding someone for that. The top is such a pushover for just going along with it, but I appreciate he tried.
All it takes is saying "hey I'm into pretty heavy roleplay that would extend outside the bedroom, potentially following a script with milestones. Would you be okay with that?" Then that way his partner knows what's going on and can "act" better in the scenario. Bottom just wants someone to read his mind
Y'all Evie literally isn't even wearing a wig with the most unique hair color. Rosie knew it was her sister like there's no way except for stupid plot mechanisms. I hate it when authors do stuff like that as if they haven't spent time in the past saying she's unique because of her hair color... This is ridiculous









Yeah this was toxic but I need to know what happens to that side couple... Talk about tragic love yeesh