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Story so good its hard to believe its authors first work

NO YOU CANT END CHAP LIKE THIS, U CANT END WITH THIS HOT FCKING PANEL AND LEAVE US TO STARVE LIKE STREET DOGSSS

Wtf was that ending..? I thought its gonna be longer i let it matinate at chap 58 i come bavk 4 chapters later and it had ended??
I will hold up my previous opinion it had potential that hasnt been executed, the story lenght was too short for the amount of lore author tried to put. The story lacked in depth, it felt cliche and superficial at times. Not every story has to be great theres nothing wrong with that I enjoyed some parts and art is nice but I think author lacks expierience and bit more than they could chew.
I think if it just had a few more chapelters and author took time to sharpen their writing skills a tad bit more it could have been great, and I would overlook the shallow feeling of the first part of the story, but it took turn in dif direction unfortunetly

Its really hard to rate this for me bc I read worse stuff that was straight up bullshit, but looking at this manhwa I feel like I am looking at my child that had bright future ahead, but life fucked them up and instead of pursuing their dreams they ended as corporate slaves. I feel objectivly 6/10 will be good I did enjoy the art but as I said story was mid, doesnt mean its bad but it means its a read and forget I feared it would become.

Awwwh so cute!! I love obsessive x obsessive trope wish it was a bit longer tho

First time seeing intersexual second gender

Bruh went into comments to see if worth reading bc i really liked the authors previous work but i guess it doesnt adds up to the previous one lolol

I just came to reread this series for 100th time and checked rhe last upload I literally cannot belive its been over 2 years since this serie ended I feel like it was yesterday

I knew its going to end, but it still hurts

I am manifesting specials asap it cant just end

I think story is a bit mediocre. It does not mean I think it's inherently bad, but it's neither a great thing.
It feels like this is caused by authors inexperience with writing. They follow certain tropes, but they don't have the indepth understanding of said tropes, so although it looks great on the surface, it feels a bit off to readers. My main problems are fight scenes and also depiction of grief and romance pacing.
I'll start from the grief depiction. She was like the mother figure to ml, but we don't really feel that emotional scar her death left on him. It's the first time where he knows he won't see somebody because he couldn't regress at that time, making it difficult probably for him and we can see it, but only in one chapter which I think could be explore more deeply. Even in dungeon when they are talking about her passing it does not feel impactful, it just feels like author knew they had to feel sadness in that moment but didnt know how to write about it.
When it comes to fight scenes my main problem is that they feel just off. Again we can see what emotions author tried to depict but it feels like they didnt really knew how to write about them leaving us with battle that seems written correctly but feels a bit off.
And when it comes to romance its bie of a nitpick but pacing felt weird especially at the beginning.
Overall idont think its bad but its not great too, if autjor is going to keep the same level its just gonna be read and forget. Its def better than some slophwas outthere but u cant call the story great just bc its doing the bare minimum. I think it has potential but writer has to learn how to actually write an emotional scene thats going to resonate with on deeper level with audience. They can do it for romance scenes so it shouldnt be so bad to learn it for fight scenes or more emotional ones like funeral.
I think I am going to let this marinate for a while. I had fun reading this but I need a tad bit better quality to keep on reading.

Tldr: its pretty normal but it has potential for the story to become better if writer gains experience.