Thanks so much for the update, uploader.
How can they be so flirty the morning right afterrr no one complaining though
I'm so thankful for the slowburn way of writing [in this story] and how well it's done too.
It's given us insight on both characters and their personalities, and in a well paced way. We've also learned about their goals, their struggles, their way of dealing with their struggles, and also we get to watch them fall in love slowly and take care of each other RAHHHHH I just love domestic lovey dovey pairs I cannot geT ENOUGH
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This is already lengthy but I also must say how much I loved the writing and art for Seo-an's panic attack scene. I haven't seen much media portraying anxiety well, nonetheless panic attacks so it made me feel happy and seen.
To some, it really can feel as if you're dying, and the relief after after is also mixed with heavy fatigue and loss of sudden adrenaline.
JESUS it's so freaking G O O D
SOO TRUEEE
Thanks for the updates omg thank you Wfarts
And Mr. Mo is waiting for you patiently, c'mon man. Make your move, go get 'em. Come to a conclusion, please. Go get your mans, son. The office romance trope is usually my favorite but Xiao is just burning everything slowly right now (including his food).
ARE WE FR GETTING A LOVE RIVAL?? WAIT WAIT WAIT
'CAUSE
There's always a trope of someone in a loving relationship being hit on by a less popular or more often an equal rival.
What if ML is gonna win
damn. Maybe I'm being too hopeful. BUT. If so, it'd be new, I haven't read many stories where the rival wins and is introduces to the story second.
This story making me revert back to religion, got me praying and hoping and shit-
(tbh if he doesnt win Dan over I wanna sell my leg arm: PLEASE have Jaekhyung get his ass beat AT LEAST ONCE) LMAO
*What if ML (AKA eyebrows) gonna lose I mean, I'm reading this story on THC so I don't get so pissed off at Jankhyung and rip my laptop apart
YESSS HOPEFULLY ITS ANOTHER 2ND ML IS THE REAL ML TROUPE LOLOL
I read my comment 4 times before pressing enter an d still sent out so many typos ⚰ damn
Omfg youll get my hopes up and shit. I hope so too; ill laterally take back everything i said about this comic being cliche and boring
E X A C T L Y.
It would be something NEW and FRESH and most readers would be ecstatic, I bet my left arm.
There's so many boring tropes and all this follow the same pattern, we need something new fr
Omg i am gonna take a stretch here and say; what if dan becomes a top? What if beinga bottom isnt for him and he ends up being with heesung (the new perosn) and they end up together.
Cuz tbh trauma can change the way you go about intercourse. And dan has ALOT of that trauma
Tbh i cant even see jae as a character
Yk these villains who are there just there for the plot? Thats exactly how i see him in this story. So the idea of him and dan dating seems so weird to me.
DUUUUDE waitt you got a point. Jae being the antagonist as a Ml is SUCH A GOOD TWIST. If Mingua did this (probably wont we are praying so hard) that'd be something very new and ughhh I want it to happen so bad.
Dan defo has a lot of trauma after all of this yeah. I can't imagine him wanting to bottom after all of that.
I saw another comment (can't remember) say what if Dan was a top and paired with Potato- WAITTTT
WHAT IF okay this is also a stretch but what if Potato becomes the next big thing and like Dan and Potato become a couple?? That'd be so NEAT
Or the blondie yeah? Maybe all his confidence will help Dan.
Or maybe the blonde sasssy guy will put Jaekhung IN HIS PLACE? Maybe make him less of an asshole idk because it seems they know each other
This story has SO many ideas because people want the best for Dan so badly lmao they're all so good though
this was kind of a mess I'm just so stoked now
OMG ive seen that comment and tbh i loved it way too much.
Like imagine potato gets to know jae by his true colors and sees how he treats dan and tries to pull him out of that relationship?????
I MEAN omg. The time ppl were calling potato by his nickname (potato) and dan calls him by his real name bcuz he knows its rude and is descending for him and he relates???
I sooOOOo agree with the dan get his conf from the sassy blonde dude, they become best friends in this plotline and he ends up pushing dan to becoming better and having a better image of himself.
THO. I dont think its right for dan to just jump into a new relationship after an abusive one, it will be only right for him to take a break and maybe get some therapy/counseling to understand his worth.
Damn dude it would be so cool if jae ends up being the villain in this story, if the author does that it would be the best plotlines in history.
And UGH i would love to see the Blondie putting that jaeshit in his place, in ANY way. Like beat him up; expose him; involve him in a scandal; ANYTHING.
Like dude the plotline is so trash fans are making there own fanfiction
OMFGGG DUDE. YES! I hope if that does happen potato does something to help (idk why he wouldn't though??) He already almost caught them once when they were still at the gym so that is such a solid theory.
Especially with Dan being respectful and calling him by his name because he understands and relates is so damn good oml, I never even noticed that? Thanks for pointing that out. (also what is his name I'm so bad at remembering them I've just been calling him potato too). ngl potato WOULD be a cute nickname if the demeaning ties the other gym guys put behind it didn't exist.
YES. Having that support and being around other confident people is something Dan really needs right now fr. I hope and he blonde guy hit it off well and Dan gets some sort of epiphany.
10000 freakin percent dude.
Therapy after all of 'whatever you want to call it' and abuse that Jaek put him through is also seriously needed. He needs time to heal, process what happened to him, and also become more in-tune with himself and find out what HE really wants to do with his life.
He is treated like he is worth nothing; not worth time to wait, not worth the care, not worth listening to. I hope he doesn't start believing he's worth nothing; he's definitely persistent, he never gave up on his grandma. I hope he doesn't give up on himself either.
IT WOULD BE THE best TWIST FR. I can't put into words how amazing I find that.
I cannot get over this theory at all, it's my absolute favorite, I'm just so tired of boring stories with people saying "it ain't new, what's there to complain about" THAT is the point, there's nothing new or out of the mold anymore.
*David Cross voice* "I NEED SOMETHING NEW, I NEED SOMETHING FRESH-"
Yaoi authors: "T-that is new, yeah the story line is the same but the themes and characters are different..."
There's barely any plot anyway so- WAIT. WAITTT. Hold up now.
Besties and bruhloved. And lurkers who have gathered here today:
I'm no avid writer. I've written short stories for classes. I write poetry sometimes. BUTT.
Genuinely, seriously, whole heartedly, I would legitimately write a fanfiction for this so readers can all have their happy endings because it's all so painful right now.
"JINX- INTO THE MULTIVERSE!"
A03 is calling to me like it never has before LMFAO there are so many hypothesizes and theories of how they want it to go, I'm seriously thinking about this so much now. I wonder if other writers would want to help?
OMFG this whole plot we are doing is making me excited dude, getting my hopes up and everything.
Like imagine potato finding out dan and jae are living together and knowing WHY and then he would talk to dan about how their "relationship" is very imbalanced and that he needs to leave it asap.
Id like to imagine potato helping dan find a better job i feel like someone as sweet as him would do that.
AND YEESSSS when i first saw it i went: "is there something going on here??" Like dan knows what it is like to be degraded by ppl just by his looks so being a bully too doenst fit him one bit. And it's such a way to start a romance after so much abuse, itll be pretty and healing for everyone (especially dan)
I have an idea for angst; dan actually falls inlove with jae (due to stockholm syndrome) and physically cant pull himself out; so then when these new characters (potato and blondie) come to help him out in their own ways he then can get out.
Dan srsly has no friends whatsoever its so sad, he is alone in this world and he cant even tell his grandma (his only family member) he just has to go through all of this alone.
And omg tbh same i dont remeber potato's name at all and yeah potato is a cute name but the reason for it is descending so i can understand why dan called him by his name.
Okay THOUGHT. What if Dan and blondie hit it off really well and since that dude needs pt he asks dan to work for him on his set (i am assuming he is an actor here) and Thats when he leaves the job at the gym?? Okay another thought; what if they date eachother for a while and thats when dan knows how its SUPPOSED to be treated. And then they break up on good terms since dan need to go for counseling since jumping into a relationship asap didnt work and then he meets potato again and stuff?
MAYBE. Since the author is portraying jae to be rough since he is a boxer potato would be a boxer too but he would be gentle??
ANYWAYS. Yes dude the counsling is a MUST. He needs the time to reflect and understand what happened; i am gonna say, the pacing in this story seems really fast to dan. Its like everything is happening at once he doenst have time to process it at all. Its like he gets in a problem, takes a breath doenst have time to think then gets into another one.
Dude this twist would be amazing; something to remeber like all the bl i read i never remember anything from them cuz they are all the same in plot just diffrent characters so this happening to a story having an actual PLOT TWIST. Would be deadass the best thing i read. Like the author then would be writing this fr not just going with the flow with whatever is sexy.
AND LMAO TRUEEE the same plot and diffrent characters, its so trueeee. Its all the same just diffrent atmosphere
NO WAY. Okay dude i am an actual writer like ive written actual books and novels taht are out there rn just ina. diffrent lang but i have a way with english too. And tbh its NEEDED. This story is boring as hell
And painful too; id love to co-write if you dont mind, we need to A03 this asap,, the readers deserve an actual story and this comic has SO MUCH potential its crazy.
Too bad its all gonna go to waste so why not write a fanfiction?
I'm too hyped to even get words out now but just YES, YES, YES, AND YES.
THIS is so damn good (so far). We have a confident and amazing FL who does what she can for what she believes in and a badass, cute, and dangerous vampire ml.
I'm just worried about the ending cause it appears from comments most don't like it... I hope it is at least tolerable
listen to the comments the ending is shitty. ive just finished rereading it cause ive never seen the ending but i regret finishing it ngl. imma just imagine a different ending in my head instead.
Thank you so much. Man, that sucks.
I'm really loving the story so much though dang. Super curious, but not enough for spoilers; I think I gotta put myself through the pain to see the end. Experience it first hand yk?
I'll join you soon in imagining a better ending, bro.
I wish I knew this has had such a dog shit ending before cause the amount of anger I felt after chapter 60 was insane and without the comment section I never could vent how bad the ending was
I just want new romances, where are all these sad and abusive stories in disguise under pretty art and a seemingly good 'plot' coming from? You CANNOT have S&M or BDSM without a safeword! It's called a SAFE word for a reason. Communication is important.
It's just messed up now.
The isolation though WHAT WAS THAT????
Let me reiterate a few things.
You can read this. Hell, you can enjoy it even. Shits weird as hell, I'm not into that, but whatever boo. You do you!
Have your weird fantasies. You're a grown adult allowed to read what you want... I literally don't care. But that's the thing. No one wants to know that you enjoy reading about literal rape. Even if it's fictional? You're enjoying a scene of rape. We don't CARE. It's taboo and looked down upon for a reason. Youjust gotta know that people are gonna be weirded out and say something. So.
I'll agree to disagree. End of discussion. So there. Good for you!
At least acknowledge that it's rape and not sex. Enjoy the rest of your story.
What pisses ME off and the point you're not getting is the ''stop reading it then," "It's just sex," "why read it?", and "it's JUST fiction". Y'all will pull every excuse out of your ass to defend him. THAT is what's funny. Why defend a rapist, fictional or not? It's still rape.
Rape doesn't = sex.
I KNOW it's fiction but I'm curious to see how this shit show ends. Why do you care why I'm reading it? Do I have to like it? It's gonna be so humorous to see what poor excuse the author had to make him this way, I wanna see how this dumpsterfire ends. It's so BAD, it's interesting to read. Get it?
I'm allowed to hate the character, he rapes Dan every chapter. I'm allowed to comment my disgust. I'm allowed to have my opinion. What's funny is how you'll go balls deep and fight to defend him and fight us on the comments. That shit is so fking funny.
Why defend? Why. I still don't have a good answer from any of you. Why.
Also, the promotion of rape being downplayed as 'sex' and that it's okay IS concerning. Rape is an absolute no and nobody deserves it. Know that it's rape. Do the bare minimum at least.
So, again. Block my valid ass and move on if it bothers you THAT much that it makes you write essays against my silly comments hating on a fictional character. I'm not hurting nobody or their feelings. (Although, actual reasons as to why you're defending a fictional bastard, that make sense, would be interesting to read. I'm genuinely curious, but I haven't heard anything reasonable or new).
Why respond? You're annoyed? Ignore and block me then. :)
You disagree with what I'm saying? Re-read the above.
Thank you.
It's funny as hell seeing the hate comments Mr eyebrows get, we bonding over his goofy ass being dragged, let us hate this SS tier toxic red flag. He and Seungho would be best friends LMAO people hate on characters all the time. It's nothing new.
Preach. You are so eloquent. My medicated ass could never. I agree lets get along! Love it or hate it~
I dropped this around a year ago, should I finish reading it? [No spoilers though please] Thank you. (〜￣3￣)〜
pls you have to ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Thanks lmao, needed the motivation and assurance ( `u`)b
finish it its so worth
their love story is literally perfect. definitely worth the read!!!
Thank you I just decided to start over instead, that might help
I wish I was never convinced to give it a try cause now I can't stop hate-reading it. Now I'm curious to see where the uh ''plot'' goes, I wonder what Dumbass Dan and Jerk Jaekyung do next chapter. Gotta agree with what someone else said: hope someone comes along and falls in love with Dan and saves him but that probably won't happen.
Here's what I want to happen:
Genuinely hoping some other boxer comes along, falls for Dan, Jerk Jaekhyung has to fight other boxer, he doesn't have Dan and doesn't have sex the night before the match, therefor jinxing him, and the other guy wins the match and Dan gets to have a happy ending with other boxer guy. BOOM I wrote a better plot under 5 seconds, c'mon Mingua...
Duuuuude , I haven't even imagined that as a plot turn! Now I definitely agree and hoping this will happen, someone needs to sweep Dan away to happy land!
Please, I was hoping for a a long time for a boxer love story! I love beefy men and boxing, so I was excited for this only to be let down Just let my dream come true. Or maybe Dan will get beefed up and fight him lmaoo, just anything at this point!
for real!! i, too can't stop hate-reading it!! goddamn this good art and my undying curiousity for how this one will end
You and me bestie, we're really all in this together lolz
Who needs crummy oxygen when this breath of absolute purified fresh air is here. This story adds 5+ years to my life and gives me infinite serotonin, glad to have found this
on a more serious note, love to see the genuine conversations and chemistry [all] the characters have, the interactions are meaningful and feel real, that's the best and most simple way I can form it into words.
i want you so bad
Lmao