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frog_mcgee created a topic of Timing (Hena & Mary Calmes)

-art's kinda mid, especially when it came to the clothing
-everything feels so asian for some reason
-pacing issues. The romance between stef and rand was developed wayyy too quickly
-despite what the author said about mandy, she really was still a one-off character
-the conflict between stef's boss and hitman was so underdeveloped :/

3/5 it was decent I guess ;/

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