Yukko M.'s Topics (4)

I'm lost. Which one is the brom guild again? Who is going inside the RP dungeon?

It's feels like there's a missing part of the chapter 60, what happened after they were planning to take the other evidence and in what moment Tracy went back to the state?

It looks like whoever's was in charge of the art and the writing, change for the worst. I can understand that the artist changed after the first season, but now the art is worse after every chapter. And the pacing of the history is completely off, like one minute is about the brother return from war, to a selling wool business where FL want to crush the competition, then is about a good tea time with her father who suddenly knows everything and don't want her anymore. There's no transition and the history of the brother with pink hair is completely forgotten. Plus, the princess don't give anything to the history more than comedic relief, and is not even good because the pacing is sooooo off. At this point, is like there's no real order in the history, maybe the novel has better pacing, this one is doomed.

Please someone else translate the raws, the story is too good and the one's that upload this right now have the chapters under a pay wall and you can't even buy the stuff because their page doesn't work. I'll even draw the censored parts if someone decided to take over the translation of the story ;-;
Here's the raws
https://blacktoon316.com/webtoon/15598.html