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thr bullet-point summsry was a life-saver BWHSHAHAH cus i honestly couldnt keep up (its a me problem) anyway, is that guy on the chapter 5 sneak peek the ml?? if so,, its making me wish that we wouldnt have romance at all. i kinda dont like him and they dont have any chemistry ( yes ive been judging from their little to no interactions)
Yes, the commander is the ML and I agree with you. I've read the novel and their chemistry is basically zero. Their relationship just too fast and too absurd. MC snatched ML's fiance, but before the wedding she's already pregnant with ML's son (the long black hair guy). MC manipulate situation and make himself look like pure victim, and ML fall for him because he thinks MC is an angel.
There's no feeling development or anything. They suddenly had sex in a cabin in the middle of the forest without any reason at all. It's so fast and so bland. Same with the other couple (The knight x the priest, and the long black hair guy x Julieta). The romance is bad, but the plot kinda gold.
WHAT???? THE FAKE SIBLING GET TOGETHER??? SHUT UP
KNIGHT x PRIEST AND BLACK HAIRED GUY x JULIETA, OK I'M EVEN MORE INVESTED
Oh yeah, they are. And I can say, they are the most happy couple in this story.
Julieta will become true saintess after freeing the dragon, her curse will be lifted, she marry his brother (who became heir of his biological father's family, because his brother is gay) and will have 3 kids. She would be legendary historical figure for a thousand years known for her benevolent.
this honestly feels like a 6-chapter ao3 fic with only 5k words