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this story is so fucking fantastic. a lot of ppl shit on the artstyle but DONT TALK ABOUT HOW WELL THE AUTHOR CHARACTERISES THE CHARACTERS. for once they are their own "person" and have their own struggles and feelings and its written so inctedibely well at dealing w their struggles together.

i love the love triangle towards the beginning of the story bc it made!!!!!1!1 sense!1!1!!1!1 i grew to adore each character because their flaws are what makes them shine in their own way. its not a matter of "ugh i hate him bc he stinks." or "i like him cause he cute!!" it goes deeper. they all accept each other and theyre one of the healthiest poly couples ive read in a while. its so beautiful. honestly.

also on a perverted note (。•ᴗ-)و ✧ the bottom is so cute id wanna bully him and tease him and lowkirkenuinely do shit to him aswell. (i cant remember any of the char's names, forgive me stranger) the lighter haired ml is so valid for feeling the way he does for the bottom in that way LOL

10/10 beautiful gorgeous my god i need more ppl to read this story and not shit on it for base level ideas. THE ARTSTYLE IS TOLERABLE u get used to it!!!!!!! its cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (￣ε(#￣)Σ

this is my first comment on this site so i apologise if my thoughts arent coherently written.

what the fuck? when i first read the ending (after powering through) i thought "right. okay. and?". i personally hate it when the story has its peak and most crucial moments towards the end, because it does not usually give time for the reader to be slowed down to a calm ending. in two consecutive chapters, the ML is brought back to life and is now walking earth, going to church and still associating kalli (?) with the mc? i??????????????????

the ml promised to not think of the mc as anyone else but himself. and now??? hes????? yknow what i mean????? i understand what the author tried to do, to write a story showing how obssession can only disprove actual love and that idolising someone you have seeked after for so long can only harm them. accepting one person for themself is enough to be loved. (subjectively speaking) (does the author know that though? /j)

its so WEIRD, its difficult to word it. i loved it when the mc was feisty. i loved it when he had edge to himself. but the ml was infuriating in the early chapters. something something i loved him and then shows evidence of maybe 2 times he has shown to " love" him, whilst having a piles of proof SHOWING EVIDENCE THAT THE MC SHOULDNT REALLY BE LOVED BACK. (cough cough jinx? cough cough) (this story is better than that yaoislop anyways)

i hated the ml. and i still do. he SA'd the mc, for no reason that could ever be a percentile close to being acceptable (duh. its RAPE.). the good thing he does is try to warn the mc abt that hyung but that guy still manages to come close to ruining the mc's life. like.? was? that part? neccessary? im sure the author couldve written that hyung to have been kicked out of his job some other way. i dont think the rape was neccessary. (only time i respected the mc).

additionally, the whole thing with going to another world. im crine (i cant even be serious anymore i apologise). the fuck do you mean you saw fire coming from his library, and the time after next when you finally go back to the library youre in ANOTHER WORLD????? and you walk around bare foot?? (gross). like yeah go find your "one true love" but that whole situation w the emperor, im sorry, i giggled. its so cliche i love it.


TL;DR: the story has ups and downs. weird read, wont reread. artstyle improved after s2 majorly.
#－.－) 6/10 tbh
sorry for the yap #yikes