i js read this bc i got curious... WHY IS IT SO FLUFFY (´д｀､) like im a sucker for these kinda stories... was i destined to find this masterpiece?!
anyways, i love them both, i thought this was gonna be full hardcore smut w no plot, but i was mistaken and im glad >♡<
BROOOO its good, i REALLY liked how this was going, but yes, why is it so rushed??? i would've loved for karyan to have a proper ending... and more family time??? even more lore like who was jerry before all this??? i understand the ending isnt rlly one so he didnt return to where he came from BUT STILL??!?! the nightmare curse was so random and for what? they didnt even say why that mage cursed him, nor we got to at least know what happened to his previous life... i was hoping for it like idk, to be smth that happened while unconscious, but ilya (or whomever ended up w) was his partner already and it was a dream or idk bro i just... i was rlly hoping for an "ABSOLUTE CINEMA" and it was... ok.
i rlly do love the concept and all the characters, it was weird how the brothers were a target and it was excused, bc if ilya said his emotions for him werent bc of the system, DOES THAT MEAN THEIR BROTHERS WERE ACTUALLY...??!! and like they randomly fall out of love but... idk... too mamy loose strands (not to mention wtf was the system and why did ilya suddenly was able to see that) buuuut ig it was worth my time （￣へ￣）
gimme more of my babies, the reason i started this was bc of them and... stop the smut a lil... its just too much it starts getting repetitive...
like yea i first read it as "we ARE dating" not "we WERE dating" BUT STILL SHE LOOKS SUPER KIND AND RESPECTFUL plus yea its obvious muroi and her are in love... and ofc she wsnts to know if MUROI knows in case there's a misunderstanding?? (tbh ion understand this part but its obviously not meant to be a bad thing) AND its probably just a shock to hirano bc he obviously wouldnt have expected that BUT THEY BOTH LOVE EACH OTHER AND WE KNOW HOW THIS AUTHOR IS W THE MISUNDERSTANDINGS; THEY GET CLEARED PRETTY FAST so pls dont hate on yamada, she's just a girl ffs （￣へ￣）