I don't get it, is the spirit some kind of the Lorax the one tied to the tree and the pond protecting the environment or something? What is the spirit's purpose and why does it want to go outside. Also I feel uncomfortable about the age gap, it's like the FL's grandfather or father's age haha
Do you guys really think she killed her son? I'm curious, there is no evidence she did and even our protagonist friends were skeptical about it. Our protagonist doesn't even know the whole story like her mother and father. It was even said her only memory when she was a kid is when her father "mysteriously disappeared." Tho it might be implied she killed the protag's friends but that might be a twist for us in the end since our MC also has mental health disorder. That's why the mother asked the psychiatrist if that's genetics.
What if the mother is innocent this whole time? Can't really trust the story since there are mental disorders type of things. Reminded me of the twist in My Deepest Secret story.
She can't be innocent, she killed her friend.
WAIT WAIT what iff its some type of genetic mental illness that changes one's personality while unconscious like DID, so both the mother and daughter have it and the daughter in her psycho state was the one who killed her friend (red hair) & her brother. And her mother knows about it and is just an accomplice, so the mother being suspicious was jst her cleaning up after her daughter's mess. would be a cool twist
Exactly! That's why I'm going to wait before rooting to any of the characters. Let's wait until we finally see the whole picture. It seems like the author and the artists were intentional and there might be twists.
People here really excused the cheater just because the girl is the story's antagonist. Sure, she is a murderer but she played the perfect role of a wife, a mother, and a friend. She also supported everyone, yet none even let her abort and have control over her own body. Even have him used her parents to back away support when she is just studying. Objectively speaking, she got her facts straight but none of them were morally right.
The story is shitty but at least the character played what her role is.
The story aint shitty (〜￣△￣)〜
The story is shitty though. She killed people who helped, cared, and protected her. She also killed innocent people. There is no character development and the pacing is odd, there are too many time skips too. There is also little to nothing likable about the MC except being OP as a demon. Also, the side characters are written as one dimensional, something to be played for MC, and too dumb. They didn't even question anything (except on who offered loyalty) and just agreed because "plot." It's lazy writing to me like the author just want to be edgy and callous.
In terms of art, it fits for romance/fantasy and lacking in gore which is not fitting for the story. We tend downplay what she did because the art failed to deliver the fear of her power.
What I liked is that she being the devil is true to her character (except the inconsistency in terms of exterminating corruption). I think that's the charm of the story. There are so many villainess there who aren't really villains, just misunderstood, the scapegoat, or the immature ones in the family. Here, she really is a menace but sometimes it's too random which shows the lack of dept in the story.
The ppl who helped her were bad ppl too dummy and there has so far not been anyone to care for her, i see you only see whats right infront of you.
art isnt smthn that can be catogorized by anyone and as someone who seen bunch of gorey stuff irl and even experienced gorey trauma this artist greatly portrayed the fear, the art is perfect you just wanna sound smart(⌒▽⌒)
Idk the author at all but this is a great story for those who dont JUST see whats infront of em and completely turning their brain off to all the other things hidden in plain sight
The characters arent written badly, there are many people like this irl and even more so back in those times, real people are very much dumb(like you for instance) that doesnt make the chars 1 dimentional whateva tf you mean by that, it's great seeing these evil greedy ppl being punished by mc without remorse, many authors are to scared to write stories like this lol
Anyways you not being able to truly see the story for what it is and making up random problems like the art fe doesnt make this story shitty, it just makes your perception of things shitty and thats fine, we all going through the journey of life differently and at different paces, someday maybe you'll be a little more perceptive too(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Not the ending that I liked but the story itself is very unique and not the type of OI we usually read. It's very emotional from the way it tackle things. It has potential but could be improved.
For the FL:
The FL is not as proactive or as smart unlike other FLs from other stories I usually read since she's mostly reactive and on defense mode. The FL is not as scheming too or strategic for someone who loves and writes thrillers for a living and who manage to win best seller novel. She knew the story but didn't even make more plans about it esp given that the antagonist is a serial killer to prevent many deaths and only managed to save the ML which to me is kinda bias on her part.
For the OGML:
The OGML is also not the typical yandere since he had harems of dead body in his basement which is honestly not my type of stories and honestly gave a huge disgust factor which is why it justified to us readers why the FL chose our actual ML. Although at first I did root for the people OGML choses to kill because it makes sense given that those people were trash anyways. Him being suspicious of the FL at first was also great and how he changed his strategy from killing to negotiating is great which shows how smart and scheming was he. But what I don't like is in the ending he seems to lost some brain cells when the FL tried to manipulate/lie to him which felt like not as consistent on his part. Instead of a smart serial killer or a possessive yandere, in the end he just looked like a perverted killer to me who just chose some random pretty girl who gave him a bit of kindness. And how he did use metaphors of flowers it showed how he just objectifies women which is not something I liked and when the author made the readers sympathize with just because he's lonely. That's BS.
For the ML:
Also what is unique in the story here is that the real ML is not like other ML who were overpowered but did let the OGFL shine and was vulnerable. However, he might be a good gut but too passive for my taste and just lets things happen for the FL like he didn't even tried helping to clear the rumors about her too. The ML is not as strong to beat the serial killer which make sense in the story since he is just an ordinary guy who makes coffee and lattes vs serial killer who got more body counts. I don't like the ending that it is basically the self insert of ML IRL and profitting of her work when she was alive.
Overall, it's a unique OI and has potential and I kinda get why despite it's uniqueness it didn't get 9/10 stars here and just 8.4.
While I like the self awareness of the OGML on the last part of profitting of his crush's work, it still left a bad taste on my mouth and saying all IRL story of the OGFL. I don't think the true OGFL would be happy about the ending if you asked me.