Through all that crying and sobbing, he didn’t say I love you. Aaah JJK!!
This is poor storytelling. Why must the ml’s redemption come at the mc’s demise?! It’s not right for Dan to suffer like this
There is too much angst, I’ll come back in several months when the pot has cooled down and is simmering
When is the baby growing? She’s been an infant since last year




