he may be going through a redemption arc but I won't forget what he done to dan. it feels like this story is missing something but I can't point my finger on it it feels? off? rushed? unbalanced? idk
too little arc for his redemption imust say. if author spent 50+ chapters solidifying him as a jerk, it could have worked if author wrote around 20 chapters showing his character development. But no, he had a throwback thursday moment and suddenly felt affectionate to dan. That's where i see it all being off.
too little arc for his redemption imust say. if author spent 50+ chapters solidifying him as a jerk, it could have worked if author wrote around 20 chapters showing his character development. But no, he had a t... hope world
yeah that's why it feels like it rushed and forced rather than a genuine redemption arc and I fully agree with you
he may be going through a redemption arc but I won't forget what he done to dan. it feels like this story is missing something but I can't point my finger on it it feels? off? rushed? unbalanced? idk
too little arc for his redemption imust say. if author spent 50+ chapters solidifying him as a jerk, it could have worked if author wrote around 20 chapters showing his character development. But no, he had a throwback thursday moment and suddenly felt affectionate to dan. That's where i see it all being off.
yeah that's why it feels like it rushed and forced rather than a genuine redemption arc and I fully agree with you