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This pretty much tracks based on the novel, iirc. It'd be rushed if they just skipped over Joshua's inner monologue or never even trying to.
Glad that there's no unnecessary drama to crop up, honestly. This was their biggest hurdle for the longest while, and it was, imo, resolved well enough. There's no insane build up nor climatic confession; simple and straight to the point. Fitting for Joshua's character tbf.
Bro, the younger brother is just irritating the fuck out of me. Like I genuinely cannot find myself liking him at all, he has no charm to him that I can overlook whatever the fuck he's pulling.
Going to let it cook because right now, I can't.