beta
The idea and the characters are interesting, you know like him beeing an omega without a lot of confidence, which is caused by the people surrounding him and other factors, getting together with someone who's kinda an opposite to him. But the storytelling and character development isnt that great, and there are alot of unanswered question like what happened to his best friend? And the Café owner? Wasn't he supposed to be a second live interest? And why did he sudenly change his mind? And the doubts the mc had about himself and the feelings of the love interest towards him were just to exaggerated. He also got past his miscarriage very fast. And what about the bodyguard who would harrass him? It's just that it was kinda messy and unorganized, to the point that the author would add things like the second love interest (the omega) or those people whispering about the Mc in the hospital after his miscarriage and just forget about them and not utilize them for the betterment of the story. And in general, the ending wasn't satisfying at all, because on one hand the relationship seems kinda shallow because of how it came to be / of the storytelling, and on the other the Mc didn't get that clean break from his past where we see him leaving his past job and toxic friends behind,amd making new better ones. All in al great concept, could definitely use better storytelling, which is something that the author would and will probably develop over time.
Like at this point how will it ever reach a point when they can love each other, when the main character himself can barely manage to fall in love before getting fucked over