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The comments are really critical of the story and i genuinely enjoyed it. It’s that cliche story you’ve heard 1000 times but it has its own uniqueness to it. I liked it and I encourage you to give it a try and form your own opinions :)
The story and premise is really good but the authors meaningless self insert and side story makes the story more confusing. Then nothing is explained in detail, like yeah the characters did this and that but WHYYYYYYY