Genuinely the uke is exactly where he wants to be this is crazy and the seme has no actual charecter development. And the uke is Genuinely a victim of everyone in his life.. i feel like the story got cut short like... das it? And the uke will live in this life 4 ever? Where hes constantly anxious of hurting hid partner and that his friends and family will never support him for who he really is? Like give him the chance to be freakkyyyyy and yandere too. Also every sex scene read like rape since the uke kept asking to stop, and unlike alot of other yaoi that use the 'your mouth is saying no but your body is saying yes' trope, this one didnt feel like,,, his body was saying yes...
But i did like it i love yandere
Heh.. guysssssss the kiss is coming soon im so excited. They took away the first one, when sayong was revealed to he the boy, he was supposed to kiss cha eui jae on the forehead but im pr sure he didnt but!!!!! Yay!!!
Is it just me or is the translation kinda weird (^-^;
Unrelated hut i couldnt even enjoy the fake sex bc of the 2nd hand embarrassment omg
Yea, some of it feels off. Dindin really needs to take a break. This doesn't feel like her
im sorry, it’s supposed to be a little awkward since it’s their first time having sex and they’re still in that enemies-to-lovers, so that might be why some lines feel kinda stiff... that’s also why dohwan says it feels like cheap porn. but thanks for letting me know! I’ll make the dialogue sound more natural and less confusing
Its okay!!! I was confused since ur translations are usually amazing!!! Not saying this one isnt i appreciate u. Im also delusional from sickness so it might jjst be me. Thank u for ur hard work as always tho!!!
it’s totally fine! if you spot anything wrong, don’t hesitate to let me know. i checked again and realized i mixed up a few subjects because i wasn’t paying enough attention to which speech bubble belonged to who.. plus i was working on it in the middle of the night....
thanks again for pointing it out! i ended up revising a few panels because of it (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)
Fuckkkkk i love authors who write good stories.... fuckkkk in hard thinking abt ut... fickkkkk their chemistry.... fuckkkkkkkkkk ughhhhhh (˶´ཀ`˶)
So everyone who was being a bitch abt green yuri needs to apologize right now. Cuz ik ur asses are LIARS and gonna pretend like it never happened. Im gonna kill u all