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Main Story summary:
They fuck around ---> angst ---> angst ---> sex ---> angst ---> sex ---> seme gains feeling all of a sudden ---> The uke is conflicted ---> they end up together...
Meanwhile readers: 90% all the time stressed, angry, sad, screaming, crying, throwing up
I mean, the artwork is nice and we were fed well with the hot characters too. But seeing the flow of side story just confirms it for me that author is good at grasping attention at the beginning and then losing it all at the supposed "end". I have seen Oneshots with better endings TBH, so it's not even about the length of the story.