First of all, what fucking time period are we even in okay? Carriages, then cars, then pagers..and radios???? Girl pick a time period and stick with it
The dude that was his roommate fucking sucks, you wanted to fuck on Val and then you go get beat up and sexually abused. Mc comes to fucking help you because you was about to be sent to a brothel and become a whole ass bitch to some fat ass piggy dude and you throw rumors on my boy and basically spit in his FACE?? NIGGA! Like yall writing this with so much rage omfg.
Third of all, he completed isolated him from everyone after already being mistreated. Then he found someone who finally gave him respect and was Woke (period), he raped him and then gon threaten oh boy to leave him alone. Grown ass man btw crying over a friendship
Then on top of that the sister is the Biggest L, MC legit takes care of them and over here pimping himself out and the first time you have to actually be helpful you sell him OUT????????? Like dude I would be so heartbroken but you know they always gotta do the "be the bigger person" trope. Fuck that shit, if my own flesh and blood sell me out they are dead to me. Also let's talk about the ballroom scene when he started crying, and he went "rape?" Nigga did you think we were freaky and we were roleplaying? YES RAPE? NOT ONLY RAPE BUT YOU WAS BEATING ME TOO??? HELLO? Fucking dumbass wanted to be shocked when the MC was scared like bitch fuck you.
The whole story is annoying because I'm tired of having authors who treat their MC like this and give the ML some sort of development and the MC just gotta take that shit, ya know? Like omg yay happy ending but is it really? My boy never really got to live and genuinely suffered beginning to end. The mom, dad, siblings, rape, mistreatment, abuse was just too much but | have to read all of it so I can properly hate. 3/10 I've read worse like for example Hugo, one of the worst stories I've ever read in all my years on this app.
PS. To the authors You 100% can make a toxic seme and a good redemption arc but you do not have to write your Main characters like this, they do not have to suffer from childhood and to end up with a nigga like this I'm sorry. Uhm read if you want too but like try not to gng
Okay so like I HAVE to vent gng
First of all, what fucking time period are we even in okay? Carriages, then cars, then pagers..and radios???? Girl pick a time period and stick with it
The dude that was his roommate fucking sucks, you wanted to fuck on Val and then you go get beat up and sexually abused. Mc comes to fucking help you because you was about to be sent to a brothel and become a whole ass bitch to some fat ass piggy dude and you throw rumors on my boy and basically spit in his FACE?? NIGGA! Like yall writing this with so much rage omfg.
Third of all, he completed isolated him from everyone after already being mistreated. Then he found someone who finally gave him respect and was Woke (period), he raped him and then gon threaten oh boy to leave him alone. Grown ass man btw crying over a friendship
Then on top of that the sister is the Biggest L, MC legit takes care of them and over here pimping himself out and the first time you have to actually be helpful you sell him OUT????????? Like dude I would be so heartbroken but you know they always gotta do the "be the bigger person" trope. Fuck that shit, if my own flesh and blood sell me out they are dead to me.
Also let's talk about the ballroom scene when he started crying, and he went "rape?" Nigga did you think we were freaky and we were roleplaying? YES RAPE? NOT ONLY RAPE BUT YOU WAS BEATING ME TOO??? HELLO?
Fucking dumbass wanted to be shocked when the MC was scared like bitch fuck you.
The whole story is annoying because I'm tired of having authors who treat their MC like this and give the ML some sort of development and the
MC just gotta take that shit, ya know? Like omg yay happy ending but is it really? My boy never really got to live and genuinely suffered beginning to end. The mom, dad, siblings, rape, mistreatment, abuse was just too much but | have to read all of it so I can properly hate. 3/10
I've read worse like for example Hugo, one of the worst stories I've ever read in all my years on this app.
PS. To the authors
You 100% can make a toxic seme and a good redemption arc but you do not have to write your Main characters like this, they do not have to suffer from childhood and to end up with a nigga like this I'm sorry. Uhm read if you want too but like try not to gng