I'm starting to see some plot holes in the comic. So many plots aren't even explained properly? Like if you don't read the other comics and especially novels, you will be double confused on some parts
For me, it just lacks depth that the universe already have.. After I read the comments would I understand their actions, which should not happen. Idk maybe down the lines it would be explained more, but for now? I don't like how not in depth it is, and kinda just the key points of a story
That's what I said, without the novel it's personally not my favourite pacing. If you like it you like it, just saying it could be better imo. I personally like the plot and characters, but I just got confused without the additional informations
Also like I said, maybe they would explain more.. not saying it lacks depth completely. Just for now, if it continues this way which idk cause I don't read spoilers, I would not like it
Mhm I get that, but as someone who is picky with ships.. I would not read the other stories. I think they did amazing as a stand alone, but you can tell it's not a stand alone story which is my own issue (I wanna know more without reading the other comics lol). It's still a great story, just hope it wouldn't get more confusing for me
Most of those who explain are novel readers, which already fully completed this novel and apply all the info we know from the full story for the character analysis. I dont think this story is suppose to feed you all of them in the beginning since neither the main characters know enough about the other to even think of a rationale by themselves. Dane is a weird aggresive jerk to Grayson and Grayson is a schemy nepo baby to Dane. We will need to wait for their relationship to progress beyond this prejudice stage to understand and even let the other knows about their hidden past. I would suggest you to give the story about 15-20 chaps more, which will reach 50% of the novel and where their relationship actually starts (not love), if you still find the narrative lacking by then you can skip the rest of the story without much concern about missing anything.
Yea thank you, I know the period where a story is withholding information exist. It's often not in your face as much, but this just gives me question after questions which I personally don't like. Hopefully all will be answered, just hope it's not a big information dump rather than a slower paced explanation
To put it simply, I think I just have a problem with the structure pacing? It seems a lil bit hard to go around. I know I don't even pay for this, and have no right to judge it so early lol. I do like the story, so lets see how it will go. Just here for Dane atp
No worries, this story is particularly slow burn and information about both worldview and the 2 leads are shared bits by bits as the story go, which may make you feel frustrated now but will be rewarding by the end. And there are also comment section like this for you to check any info you want clarification asap. It was way worse during the novel release time since everyone was assuming this will be a super toxic story and on their edge waiting for some dark climax stuff to happens lol.
Yandere, actually normal uke, and communication in one yaoi manga? Which.. which genius maniac wrote this??? The stockholm syndrome is strong in this one