beta
Rereading this and honestly I don't think the ML groveled enough. The chasing arc was short and could have been better. I wanted to see the ML actually put in the work to win him back. Cute story and would reread again if I'm bored
no redemption arc is as good as the third ending imo
Rereading and this was so good and started off strong but you can tell it was rushed towards the end and just didn't feel complete.