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That last chapter felt like a speed run into a proposal, but it was cute nevertheless.
I wished the story was a bit longer; however, I was only expecting it since the MC was also affected by the mutation, and I wanted to see more of their daily lives and cute interactions, especially now that they are engaged to each other. I do think this story was a good read and would recommend this for someone to read as a palate cleanser or if they want something quick to read. And if this story was up your alley, I recommend reading XXX Allergy (a short read), Sign, Blood Link, or Smyrna & Capri. (The rest are longer to read but won't take that long if you are a fast reader and don't do commentary lol.) The last two I recommend have mpreg, but Blood Link shows actual baby bumps.
What the hell are you trying to do a cavity search for, huh!? I'm talking to you, Orca! Mind your hand placement. I asked for him to at least hug Nia last chapter, and THAT hug does not count. Now he's feeling Nia up after finding a couple of injuries on his body. Unhand Nia, SIR!
I hope he puts his concerns and emotions into treating Nia a bit better and communicating better than whatever the hell this is and beating the hell out of Pepe, that goddamn no-good gardener. But we'll see next chapter.