I get you as an author wanted to write a more smutty story but it gets to a point. Its literally just porn with no plot.. like- do you just love writing rape? Honestly i came back to see if thr story got better and it just got worse.. if you’re gonna make porn a story at least make it a GOOD story.
Just finished reading this and wow. This is such a beautiful story unlike some that I’ve read, genuinely this was an amazing read. 100/10 WOULD recommend