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BWHAHAHA I AM LOVING THIS. Contrary to popular opinion, I love evil 2nd leads. Haha, I’m so done with the angels who make it so obvious they’re the better choice. Love me some angst.
OMG ME TOO (≧∀≦). makes it easier to not choose them as the final choice as well, and gives the story that extra spice we need in our daily lives
Righhhhht? Ahahaha, what’s the use of fiction if we can’t live vicariously through it? HAHAHAH
The tattoo was hilarious, ngl , but honestly, I’m getting really bored with the pacing. Them getting together felt so abrupt that it almost felt like the story just skipped all the development that was supposed to make me care about their relationship. I would’ve much rather seen the tension, buildup, and emotional progression actually play out instead of having them suddenly become a couple and expecting the chemistry to carry it.
And honestly, I don’t feel the same chemistry anymore. The earlier chapters had so much more tension and emotional weight, but ever since after the hiatus, the pacing has been all over the place. It feels like the story keeps rushing through moments that should’ve been given time to breathe, while dragging out things that don’t really add much.
Maybe it’s just me, but I’m getting very little of what was promised, and at this point, I’m starting to wonder where the actual payoff is. I’ll still see it through to the end because I want to know where the story goes, but it seriously needs to pick up bcos right now, the potential is there, but the execution is not giving.
You're spot on. There was literally no emotional payoff for the readers once they got together. Even the intimacy scene felt really off. Like there was no chemistry between them imo.
I agree