beta
Agree with everyone that the whole thing with the brother was suuuper weird and uncomfortable to read. It's never acknowledged again so it didn't feel like it served any purpose in the story except that one photo the stalker takes later down the line, which I feel could have been figured out without all the r*pe and incest. I did find the brother character super annoying even though I don't think he should've gone through that, I was rolling my eyes everytime he showed up So sorry.
That being said, I continued reading and I'm actually pretty shocked at how much I enjoyed the rest of the story? Like I think the way the main relationship develops during season 2 is really cute? They both seem to be really into each other and I like that there's no misscommunication for the most part... I also think this author has found a way to perfectly balance smut which I like because I WAS reading mostly for the smut. I found the whole stalker plot to be mildly entertaining, though I don't get how the author can condemn that kind of abusive relationship yet write that shit in the first season
I think if that weird thing with the brother in the start didn't happen I would feel less weird about how much I ended up liking this. I don't blame anyone who didn't continue reading or disliked the rest of the story, it's completely understandable lol.
this is entirely unrelated to the actual story but holy shit i had to go back and reread in order because I didn't at all realize everything was mixed up and was deeply confused the entire time. despicable.