beta
Before I start reading this story " is it a love triangle story?" and " how bad is the ml?"
atp, no idea. I was ready to defend this story at the start but I've changed my mind. after 21 chapters, the plot hasn't moved at all, the MC is incompetent at his job, there's no backstory, only more questions. we don't know if MC is going to fall in love with both or either of them because neither side has progressed at all. it takes multiple chapters just to get through one SA smut scene. the smut isn't even the hot kind of body betrayal that feeds the kink, it's just awkward and makes you want to skip. I was defending ML at the start with a lot of potential but unfortunately atp author turned him into a joke of an alpha trope. you can give it a go if you like but it's not really great rn.
Damnnn....Thank you
I need the second couple story so bad the tall ass guard guy and the painter omg there is smth
between them I must see