ppl in the comments winning the falling for the faking being asleep act award and forgetting that he literally left him inside of him when he went to sleep after the top passed out
comments funny as hell bc this still isnt a consensual encounter but because she was coerced into it with enough of a lead for her main reason for coming out here it passes the 'not problematic' filter LOL almost ironic how easy rape is to sell if you repackage it with how vocal people are about hating obvious nonconsensual themes
long haired man yess gawd even if the story is mid ill go through hell for a long haired baddie
shes such a pervert i love her she came in there geeked as hell
story had a decent setup just .. not a fan of the path the author went down ig w/e just think the story benefits so much more from swapping the ml to the blonde girl or preferably just having them as a polycule but atp im just here to see how it ends and see the blonde girl
my baby is so mentally ill :( honestly i hope she has more interactions with him bc he feels like the only one trying to teach her to value herself. even if he isn't ml which i very much hope he is i think hes the best influence for her
oh thats a good ending actually i was worried by the comments but it appears to be a context clue comprehension gap
wow yayyyy this is so sweet let me just get all these weird warning signs outta here haha awww
ml self sabotaging and doomspiraling... my brother just another me
ml babytrapping just for fun ok i guess idk go off girl
the final panel is taking me tf out why does he have submissive pregnancy on his stomach
smh dude couldn't handle a supernatural being with no moral compass but im #builtdifferent put me in coach ill teach him how to act
aww man this isnt monster fucking its ugly bastard!! GET OUTTA HERE OLD MAN
ok i went and read the novel out of curiosity and the 2nd half of the novel with her revenge/running arc and then his begging arc holy fuck
this story went from a solid 5 to like a 9 it might actually be one of my favorite ml chasing arcs he suffers so fucking bad i genuinely felt bad for him by ch 233
i want og hailey to be happy... put that lilac haired guy down there with her maybe he'll love her for real...
reading this to ragebait myself a little
if anyone has a link to spoilers pls share















