I don’t think that this story is ass as most people say it is, but I think it’s just the fact that it’s been crunched down into 7 chapters that the writing isn’t showing as well as it could have. I think this story wanted to be told in a long form and that’s why it’s kind of awkward to read.
Looking past that, I really love this story and I wish it was longer so I can see these two grow!!






Im so glad it didnt end smutty, this was the best way to end it off