Ive just started reading this, off the bat I dislike the bias fl shows towards Diana and Helios. I read the comments so I know they're the antagonists, but all Hestia knows atp is that Diana rejected him, then cut him off after he literally killed people.
Bad people yes, but it's her own choice if she doesn't want to be friends with a murderer who's in love with her.
It's shortsighted of the main character, and it would be nice if she gets proved wrong later and has to reflect for some character growth, but like I said I already read the comments so I don't think that's happening.
Please don't jump me for this, but merize and azael's relationship have a pretty problematic power imbalance. Don't get me wrong, theyre cute and I like them a lot, but merize was literally dropped into the demon realm, held in a snowglobe, and then had a romantic relationship with the police officer who was monitoring her??
I feel like there were so many ways they could've told their story without it being so icky, like who in their right mind would get their wife pregnant knowing theres a good chance she could die, or get eaten alive by the people delivering her baby? WHY WOULD YOU MAKE THESE WRITING CHOICES
THESE HOES TRYNA DISTRACT ME AYA DON'T FALL FOR IT HAVE THAT CONVERSATION
Not pathethic enough imo I thought he'd be kneeling on the floor, head to the ground begging for his forgiveness and clinging to his legs with tears streaming down his face
NOOO WHY WASN'T THAT THE OG PLOT IT'S BETTER THAN THE FIRST 50 CHAPTERS COMBINED