Lewin...Is this person strong because of the black magic or because they were trained from young? Assuming the black magic used is a kind of transformative magic and that they were trained from young, why do they become weak after changing back to their original form? Shouldn't they have retained the training. Honestly, it's a bit boring that they lost their power after turning back to a girl.
The fast pacing had a weirdness to it right from the start. But I'm having a really hard time getting past the family's excuse for leaving her be. To get close to the prince? A prince who was in an orphanage? A prince whose mother didn't even know was alive? Then the backstory of how she got lost- she looked much older in the flashback than when she first appeared. 20 chaps seems to be my limit
I was holding out hope for the ml but I don't know whether it is the way the story unfolds or what, but the reveal about his identity is not as impressive as it should have been? It falls flat. Him, his connection to her, and the romance line. The story was proceeding just fine before he entered. Now, I feel disappointed.











At first, it was really enjoyable and funny. But as it went on, I feel like the story progression is...weird. There doesn't seem to be continuity, and there is a disconnect. Some of the characters feel very 2d. Mmm...is it just me?