The concept is excellent—truly excellent—but for some reason, I feel the execution falls short.
There is too much repetition (I know it involves reincarnation, but the repeated parts are exactly the same, whereas other, more important elements could have been included). Also, for a concept this good, having only around 30eis chapters is too few, making the pacing feel rushed.
However, in my personal opinion, the writing is juvenile. The author attempts to craft a mature story, yet the conflict resolution and character interactions are incredibly shallow and lack adult logic.
It doesn't make sense. Before going back to the past, he was a mature working adult. Why didn't he think like an adult after returning? Did his mindset change along with it?
The concept is excellent—truly excellent—but for some reason, I feel the execution falls short.
There is too much repetition (I know it involves reincarnation, but the repeated parts are exactly the same, whereas other, more important elements could have been included). Also, for a concept this good, having only around 30eis chapters is too few, making the pacing feel rushed.