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This story was kinda bun(im highkey a hater), for someone whos supposedly 30 years old he acts like a horny possessive teenager. The other one is obviously so coddled because of his past he don't even act like an adult, if feels like I'm reading some terribly written corny highschool love story.
The main character I can understand the trauma can affect him and I love the idea but the execution is just poorly written. Everyone basically reminds you of his past every 2 chapters, and it gets to a point where if you were to put this into the real world these people surrounding him are lowkey sabotaging this disable guy because of how much they coddled him.
The male lead is just...how do I put this...annoying. This guy has no bad intentions and that's great but they way he was acting in the beging just gave a major ick. Like you'd expect an actor to know when someone's uncomfortable or know some basic manners but oh well he's just a guy who cant figure out why he likes this guy. Again he's 30 （￣へ￣）
I like how the greedy king in the story of the curse took EVERYTHING from a witch even their life and is shocked they got cursed. In my opinion I would've thought it's the royal families fault but instead everyone in the kingdom thinks, "nah uts all the witches fault so let's kill ALL of them" like bro how about yall go fuk yourself and blame the first emperor who started this mess
mind you, he didn’t even know what the cinder box was used for and he still killed the witch. like imagine the tinder box was a cursed item that the witch was trying to destroy? serves him right, i just kinda feel bad for the descendants cus now all your lives are fucked because of your greedy progenitor