it feels to short and too sped up. Plus the wording kinda makes it feeellll so different from the novel, it's so lacking and emptier..
istg if the first thing that comes out of Chase's mouth is not asking about if he forced himself on Joshua and Joshua reassuring that it was consensual for both of them... I DON'T WANT IT
And im expressing my opinion as a reader.
You can express yours elsewhere, not under my comment. Seeing how passive aggressive you are, trying so hard to be the bigger person here but still trying so hard to be right. I was just stating my opinion and feeling of frustration that you seem to deny me of. Good for you
“Professional” being an amino and wattpad author and they dont know the basics of world building or character development some of the best mangas out there include extensive dialogue sequences, goes to show the depth of your skill.
Next time consider taking the stick out from your ass instead of acting so self entitled under a comment on mgg, and maybe go write something longer than a 2 page y/n self insert on ao3
Im not sure if you’re aware but being passive aggressive to other people is also considered “rude”, so maybe consider keeping your self importance in check before you go and try and minimise another person’s opinion.
Being an “author” doesn’t mean your opinions are any more substantial than someone else’s so I see no reason as to why you’d bring it up unless you found it necessary in trying to belittle another person through some sort of hierarchical assertion.
Just expressing my opinion as a “professional” :)
I guess you are a Gez Z person, so I can understand why you are so... sensitive and you see aggressive things where they don't exist. I rate books for publishers and make edits, and I also write myself, as I told, and because I have long discussions with many others on this field, I just express my opinion on this point
I didn't try to say you are wrong, you have your opinion and I have mine, and I thought that a comment section is a space where we can discuss about this exactly... our opinions, even if they are different.
Its rich for you to bring up the fact Im gen z considering it implies you’re a millennial or older who is STILL using a piracy site while pushing 30+ does your “profession” still not pay you enough, after being able to legally work for at least a decade, to buy from legitimate sources? While then ALSO trying to correct me on social skills considering your EQ/comprehensive skills is below that of an 18 year old to not even understand your own passive aggressiveness? (Of which your “profession” requires as a basic skillset)
We can have opinions, by all means, but you seemingly still cant understand how you’re in the wrong after the issue being so blatantly pointed out in how you address people.







