Only criticism — I wish we had more information about what exactly Tod is. I’m guessing he’s a skin walker because of the eyes of the coyote (that I think was him) but it doesn’t quite fully make sense when the end potrayed him as a kind of one with nature godly entity. Still, this was absolutely incredible!
Tbh I feel like people begin a bit dramatic with calling this SA here, it’s typical dubious consent you encounter in BL’s. Yea irl this would be unacceptable but we all know that these authors operate by different rules…. I feel like this was just alright, they were cute and communicative I just wish consent was more clearly defined and given (I hate the “oh your body is saying something else” shit it’s not even hot unless it’s in a role play scene). Only thing I was seriously mad about is that he is not sadistic at all…. Where is the sadism??? Like seriously the guy is as vanilla as it gets for a jerk who doesn’t ask his partner for proper consent











I don’t think I could come up with a story more plain and boring if I tried