This feels rushed..
Could've been really good if the author didn't rush it.
I wanted to read more about what the seme thinks...
Also his reasoning of being inlove with the uke because the uke shouted,
Is such a idk I feel unsatisfied.
Could've just left it at "I found you cute and charming. The way you're clumsy and adorable. Grabbed my heart" or something...
Good.