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With the premise of the story and how its progressing, I am so FUCKING SCARED. But they are SOOO CUTE THOUGH. I love them so much. im crine.

The mysygony is so obvious dawg anyway, only reading this for my GOAT NATHANIEL.

Ok to be objective:

The writing inconsistencies are crazy and the plot holes. We are LOSING the plot. Like everyone is saying, this is just side-chick propaganda, and Allen is full of BS. I completely understand that this is a harem. It’s not my first one either. But their so-called love literally lacks depth. All they did was literally fuck and trauma dump. I don’t even know how Chris fell for this guy, nor how Allen fell for Chris. This literally just feels like the typical “you’re not like other girls” trope or whatever, which is fine—it’s a normal trope in romance. But it’s so poorly executed here that it feels like "side-chick propaganda." Everything happens way too fast too and the author fails to add depth aside from the main characters love (which aint even that deep either, lol.) So again, feels surface level. And the way women are portrayed here is really off-putting!!!! ALSO, this is jst MY take. If you love this manga, idgaf. I'm not gonna shove my opinion down your throat. You can enjoy this. This is just my thoughts.

LET THE YEARNERS YEARNNN.. and then theres the second couple

Almost… everyone sucks, tbh. And ngl, I was more invested in Kray—sad that his character was used only for a romance push and as the “villain” they needed to defeat. Which I do get, but it should’ve been written better and his character fleshed out more. As for the main couple, they are so embarrassingly surface-level. I don’t feel the chemistry; everything feels forced and just not it. Everything that should’ve been focused on is glossed over, which is crazy. But hey.. #more smut justifies it for some fuckass reason according to the author. LIKE all they do is fuck atp. The MC is the type of person I feel bad for, BUT don't cause he's the one tolerating this shit lmao.

Anyway, maybe they should take notes by reading Semantic Error. (〜￣△￣)〜

There is a total of 4 MLS'

In the novel, the ML/ENDGAME (Michael Ayers) shows up in chapter 56 — and bro, he was SO CUTE LMAO. He literally fell for the FL at first sight and confessed just a few days later. Of course… the FL rejected him, since it was all new to her (someone falling for her) and she wasn’t ready. BUT they do end up together.

Michael Ayers is a knight from the Imperial Palace who’s always compared to Lustewin Halberd (Roena’s knight/FL’s crush) because their sword skills are on par. He’s also described as super handsome, with long golden hair and sharp green eyes that all the women admire from afar… but no one actually dares approach him because of his icy personality.

BUT around the FL, He turns into a literal golden retriever. LMAO.

I JST KNEW the author didn't know what to do with the 2nd ML anymore. So they decided to make him do the most out of character shit EVER to make him unlikable and wrapped it up.

for the sake of my ass, I will drop this. CAUSE aint no way hyesung's situation/past was glossed over like THAT, and was also the reason why they finally kissed. Jst update me on the ending of this guys..

i cried so much its not even finny..

GOSH I can’t with Han Seok and Ki Woon. Like, Jaehun might’ve vented a lot and I get that it can be overwhelming, but for Ki Woon to seriously think he could hurt a cat?? that’s INSANE. And because of that misunderstanding, Jaehun ends up traumatized and gets completely cut off. If Ki Woon could believe that so fast, then honestly it feels like he was already looking for a reason to drop him from the start.

And Han Seok… gosh. Always butting in just bc it involves his lover Ki Woon. Like sure, you wanna be protective, I get it. But that doesn’t give you the right to treat other people like crap when you don’t even know the full story. It just makes you come off arrogant and insensitive.

My heart goes to Hyun and Jaeha. They suffered so much and that shit made me go CRAZY. I hate how they antagonized Jaeha so bad, like wtf. The 1st couple.. FUCKASS, SOMEONE HOLD ME BACK. My HATRED towards them is insane. The second couple deserved so much better.

ALSO IM SO HAPPY FOR THE 3RD COUPLE.. SIGHS. FINALLY.

Not the best... but its okay ig. I wouldn't reread it tho. Personally, its lacking in depth and there's plot holes. Like if the emperor for example didn't believe in the prophecy, how come he isolated the mc? it just doesn't make any sense. Many of the characters come across as one-dimensional too, though there are a few moments where some show more depth. BUT THATS IT. The ending was.. its fine i guess. Happy ending core ig.