I feel like somewhere in this chapter there was poor writing but I can’t quite point it out or confirm cs I’m too tired like something clicked n it kind of made me feel like there’s some shitty writing, and while yes, a lot of people may say it’s the rape part I feel like PLOT wise there was something that kind of ticked me off and came off as sort of poor writing, idk how to explain it so like goodnight
I feel like somewhere in this chapter there was poor writing but I can’t quite point it out or confirm cs I’m too tired like something clicked n it kind of made me feel like there’s some shitty writing, and while yes, a lot of people may say it’s the rape part I feel like PLOT wise there was something that kind of ticked me off and came off as sort of poor writing, idk how to explain it so like goodnight