beta
Very good but story is a bit all over the place. It is fine at first but it started to feel a bit convoluted after blue rangers death. Explanations of the lore or how things came to be are very stretched out and not fully explained enough. Like will get the dream world arc or competition arc paced perfectly, great story telly, etc but then the in-between bits don't compare. Those arcs/chapters feel fully fleshed out and help me to understand D better growth wise but afterwords everything else is way to jumbled together for me.
Would give this no stars if I could, but I can't. I don't feel like writing an essay today as to why this is ASS. I stopped like chapter 9 and I really don't care if it's gets better. I don't care if esper/top was kidnapped and had his body ripped apart and then was revived. I don't care about his suffering, or any stupid redeeming that the author might do later. If you want to write bad p*** in smutty stories that's fine but don't try and take yourself seriously and do a whole story. I'd also love to point out that the moment the guide is the bottom, they have no power in the relationship. I've seen in other esper bl's, that the top is the guide and the bottom is an esper. But the moment the bottom becomes a guide it's the worst thing ever. Lol
Can u give me some recommendations where the top is the guide? I’ve read pretty lot guideverse and most of it (almost all of it) the bottom is always the guide except Guiding Hazard. Honestly that manhwa is how guideverse supposedly written. Just like you said ╥﹏╥
i want some too
Metropolitan Nepenthes, can't remember the other one
Metropolitan Nepenthes, can't remember the other one