beta
Idk about this one but it kinda felt like the author changed their mind midway lol like they started out wanting a mean dirty character for the seme but then abruptly kinda switched into an overly-attached caring one which to me wasn't executed very well because the switch was too sudden there wasn't much room given for characters development. It felt like the author kinda rushed in getting to the "good part" (ie the love bomb part).
I kinda liked the premise of this story and I'm a sucker for tragic family stories and "found family" fluff so I hope it gets better.