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Beautiful art wasted on a poorly written story. Also, male lead had more chemistry with the psycho vampire than the black wolf guy. Speaking of, his "werewolf form" looking like a fur suit was so ridiculous it made me want to weep.
I don't understand how the wolf ml fell in love when the first time they met was literally at a rest room. I'm supposed to believe he fell in love after seeing the fox dude getting it on in a club restroom??? Sir, you have a great job which I'm sure pays you well, how about you buy yourself some standards please?
Why is everyone acting like teenage girls and not mature grown men? Seriously, no one seems to be acting their age. There's the step bro who casually visits just to bully them and teases the glasses guy about his unrequited love. Then there's the glasses guy who is supposed to be the "level-headed one" in the group but proceeds to commit sexual assault after a bit of goading like wtf??? Honestly, no one in this story is written like a normal person. Best of all is the wolf alpha dude. What "elite businessman Team Lead in a successful firm" goes out clubbing on a weeknight!?? Please
Well you are right about most things but I think that the last part is incorrect. Businessmen tend to club a lot and to drink a lot and do other type of substances the more responsibility they have. Not all of them of course but a lot of them. About the rest I don't think they are that grown up they must be all in their twenties apart from the Team Leader. However about the loving part it is rushed really rushed the concept is good but not well developed. Nevertheless it has to be taken into account that they must have bumped upon eachother before and maybe the wolf caught interest and started observing so he caught a liking and it went from there forward. Despite the fact that it is how it is the story leaves many topics untouched so there is little to hold onto.
Idk about that... Don't salarymen typically go to bars after work or more mature vip clubs (when with clients)? For the younger ones I can see them going to dance clubs but most definitely not on weeknights lmao. It's like the author doesn't have a realistic idea of what adults in the workforce are like. Or maybe adult men in general because istg these men are written like shojo characters...
Well yeah the author didn't really portray reality very well but I guess it is the way they see it. It's not thaaaaaat bad There's worse