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I did enjoy this story. I liked the relationship between the FL and ML. But I couldn't erase my bitterness towards the dad.
How do you fall in love, be with her during pregnancy and birth, leave and....just be "oh well"?!!! You don't need to return, but you don't even provide financial support for your child?! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ His regret came too late. I feel bad for the mother, who remained loyal, despite also being the one to say "go". I just skipped their side story since I knew how it ended. :|
I also wish the FL and ML had more time alone after marriage, that the babies came later. Cause they're such a handful, I do feel bad that the ML does feel ignored. It feels like they're only centered around the kids now. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
There is a lot going on, but I didn't have trouble following. I did like that all the FL got their own ML, but the dragon relationship didn't have any lead up.
There are issues where parts of the story seem to be missing. Example: they go to save the ML, they're almost to him...and then time skip to 3 days later??? And they NEVER say what happened!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I thought it was a scan error, but they do flashbacks....but again, don't EXPLAIN how he got saved!! Even the FL is confused.
Other parts I wish we saw more of was younger ML before things went bad.
And there is a child, but no pregnancy chapters. Just a timeskip. :/
Overall ok. Good if you don't have something to read. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
the plot got settled so fast I didn't even have time to be confused lmao. also some of the characters were added unnecessarily and made the plot worse like the other prince from wtv empire it's called, he wasn't even needed for the story to progress lmao overall a meh, the only thing I like was that there are many different couples, but it's just sad that their own stories got rushed and neglected