I would’ve been more disappointed if the story didn’t live up to its title…I think the author is aware that this is wrong..hence the inner monologue of Rian explaining what sex should be like..uncomfortable as it may seem, this chapter was meant to show that they have different meanings to pleasure. The emphasis on him being in pain, not being able to cum..it even seems at some point he submit, but Enzo’s overwhelming pouncing does not help. Everyone is allowed to have their opinions but I can’t agree with people who say this chapter was unnecessary or doesn’t match the theme of this story..I say this again..Enzo was never a green flag from the start..
The title of the story is bad apple. We saw this dude kill people without remorse..our first introduction to Enzo is him biting a person’s tongue off through kissing. He’s a sadist through and through. I’m not justifying the obvious coercion and assault here but I’m not expecting a black flag to think about consent.
Holy shit I love this so much. I had such a time with this and couldn’t stop laughing. It’s so unhinged to the point it’s so real. I wasn’t even attracted to doojong at first until later. I love their chemistry fuck. I have to let this one marinate I think. I’m too invested and irritated I read it so fast
Brett is the type of character I always end up getting attached to I’m ngl…the type of person that is not typical yet because of that, he naturally attracts people..it’s a plus if they’re attractive. I don’t know I feel like this author put so much details into this story it’d be too long to explain..but just know the setting, their upbringing, their values..both of them being alphas makes a lot of sense for the direction their characters took.
Aside from my praise, I was uncomfortable with their sex scenes sometimes. The only normal one I thought they had was when they went to Hayden’s home and did it in his room. Every other sex scene was them trying to one up each other or assert dominance on the other person. Their relationship was never normal to begin with so it did come across uncomfortable sometimes. Regardless, the plot was very entertaining and I found myself eagerly waiting for the next one. It’s one of those stories where their dialogue was much more interesting than me wanting snu snu..
I do wish him being sexually assaulted had been explored more tho. I enjoyed the way the author went about recounting those events but I do think this moment could’ve been one where we saw Brett vulnerable..not trying to turn the situation in his favor then again you could argue that’s what makes his character even more interesting.










71 chapters and it’s just because they’re all uploading the same thing . Bro please