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Does the storywriting get better in the side stories? I just read the main story and the second season was so damn bad, I don't know if I wanna keep reading.
Not sure because i don't know what exactly you didn't like about the storytelling because I found it better than a lot of other bls.
Oh but it does end in kind of a cliffhanger
Here's what I wrote in the description thingy:
Mc blaming ml that their relationship isn't evolving when he's literally rejecting him left and right, sudden secret plans that aren't explained, glossing over life or death situations, mc being hellbent on returning to Korea but suddenly not anymore, mc being there for his father he said he despises but constantly running away from ml he supposely likes, forgiving the man who tried to kill him, not needing lube or getting stretched before taking dick the size of a horse, ml tolerating a mf that's literally crossing him every step and even stabbing him etc.
These things bothered me so much, I had to write them down and rant first things after reading lmao
This whole chapter kinda felt like a fever dream to me. I was expecting it to be just fox's fantasy the whole time.
Idk maybe it's because of the flowers and the tinsel on the window.