ending is what ive been hoping for but last 10 chapters pmtfo with mc being indecisive asf nd js going back and fourth between the two. It was so clear who he should've been with to start and sure immortal daddy isn't human but white haired mf treated him like shit not even fuck buddy level and that's not forgivable so makes sense why he picks ml at the end of the day
Omg the bar is in hell, yall really praising him for communication as if he didn't force himself onto mc. It's so fucking disappointing when the authors pull shit like this.
I'm mostly disliking because what do you mean "it's so disappointing when authors pull shit like this"? i get being frustrated with a story's directions, but authors write whatever authors want to write, and this one clearly didn't want to write a green flag ml I'm fine with the story for now mainly because we haven't gotten the chance to deal with the consequences of the aggression, but ml seemed to already be aware he's gone trash, and also because I tend not to read the "just praise for hotness" comments since I've made peace with the idea that some people are choosing the road to illiteracy through the turn-your-brain-off way of reading
What i mean is scenes just like this one where unnecessary sa gets added another example would be pizza man and the gold palace just like this one i loved the plot and characters but the author just had to add a scene like that which never makes up for the plot of the story anyway literally what was the point in this even being here?
yeah I got that, but it's only an unnecessary scene if it doesn't lead to anything and/ or is ignored, and here it just happened, you don't know if that's the route the story will take (who knows, maybe you'll be right). you could call it misplaced if it truly doesn't fit the characters, but here we don't know the characters all that well yet and the one other time ml was angry he randomly decided to jump from roof to roof so that he can confront his sex fiend neighbour more directly. Idk, I didn't find that all that out of place, especially after the bubbling anger we got the flashbacks
but i do get that feelings get more exacerbated when reading comment after comment, in story after story, praising the sex and doing nothing with the crime
story had so much potential but l just wish they could've developed their relationship without the the sa scene which didn't even get addressed or acknowledged instead ml basically slut shames him then pounces on him ??? Even tho it was 25 chapters long this couldve easily been 7 chapters max considering the beginning and unnecessary relationship adds basically nothing to the plot imo esp js for the relationship to get rushed at the end











THE ARTSTYLE IS TO DIE FOR OMG