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Pushing sad background stories on the readers doesn't give the character good depth. The characters are so inconsistent through the entire story, Jinha was decided and now is lost, Siwon was passive on everything and now is a hero, Lu Xuan did a lot of horrible things but only because he is hurt. You have to make the characters beliavable, build them up little by little, not just make then say it they are changed. The story is not conventional, but you can cope with it if the characters are well written. I'll finish this and remember the desappointment, because it had potential, and the art is amazing.
Is it just me or they didn't have any chemistry at the ending? They did have a lot on the beginning, but since their love was so fragmentated by everything going on was weird seing them together, even if I really wanted them to end together, seems a bit forced.