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And after allat that muscle brained horse still can’t think about anyone but himself?? How incredibly fucked up in the head do you have to be to repeatedly rape someone, lash out at them almost everyday and not care for them at all?
These characters have literally NO depth to them at ALL. That muscle brained horse can only think for itself and doesn’t think consequences are a thing!
Dan is just a soggy dish cloth! After all he’s been through, and the obvious power imbalance he still thinks a game of jenga cancels it out.
Neither of them are capable of thinking about complex stuff, they have zero depth!!!
NOT a good read, do better, author!