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Still interesting but i'd like it if FL was actually his younger sister, that for some reason Ml find his parents or a letter or FL remember her past so she gets recognized as a noble. It be great because they couldn’t end together so they can improve their relationship as family, the Ml can change to be better for his sister and family, and FL ends with friend and a nice man she actually loves.
Haaaa to bad autores likes cliche storys....