ok ive come back here but apparently theres been more chapters i haven’t read. i think i really like the beginning of the story and i especially love the development between the two. eeexcept my biggest criticism is that as the story goes on, it just feels… sloppy. there’s only more unnecessary characters being added, all of them to fuck lozzo, and i genuinely think it should have stopped way earlier than it did.
especially with that one alien (?) guy, i think it was absolutely so unnecessary. all that development between shiro and lozzo just so lozzo can be a manwhore. i don’t give a fuck if he screws another guy or not, i DO care if he fucks some random ass dude off the street. but i digress, i do think the story is really good, i just hate how the author just kept dragging it and adding more names i don’t really care for.
ok ive come back here but apparently theres been more chapters i haven’t read. i think i really like the beginning of the story and i especially love the development between the two. eeexcept my biggest criticism is that as the story goes on, it just feels… sloppy. there’s only more unnecessary characters being added, all of them to fuck lozzo, and i genuinely think it should have stopped way earlier than it did.
especially with that one alien (?) guy, i think it was absolutely so unnecessary. all that development between shiro and lozzo just so lozzo can be a manwhore. i don’t give a fuck if he screws another guy or not, i DO care if he fucks some random ass dude off the street. but i digress, i do think the story is really good, i just hate how the author just kept dragging it and adding more names i don’t really care for.