I genuinely feel so disgusted …. I hate how the author is romanticising this, it’s all flowery and bright and sexy and he “craves more”?. Like it’s very obviously rape, but it feels like the author is justifying it because Amon is a monster and doesn’t understand the concept of why rape is bad? It’s gross and if he’s the male lead that’s disgusting, the scenes went on for way too long in my opinion.
The pacing is lowkey so weird
Like sm is happening and the first 2 chapters could’ve easily been dragged out to 10, but it’s just one scene to the next….
The art is nice tho
Agree I think this gonna be one of those manhwas with 16-20 chapters
Ya such a shame because the plot is interesting and the art is pretty but you can tell when the artist doesn’t have a storyboard writer
nah babe probably like 5-8 MAX
I’m crying
It's done on purpose to show that the ML was smitten with MC from day one and MC got dragged along with ML advances? It's basically done to show how MC doesn't manage to process the sudden and fast developement himself. I don't think it's that bad as it's just the setup for what's to come. Not everything needs to be written down
Hey so just because something is progressing fast doesn’t mean the author doesnt have a story board sometimes it is purposefully done like that. Either because they have a specific plan or because they intend for it to be a short story. And tbh thats fine. Ive read a lot of 5 chapters mangas that are way better than some 100 chapters manhwas
AMEN
Hey so just because something is purposefully progressing fast doesn’t mean it has to be confusing and lack direction! Short stories obviously are gonna be fast paced and I’m not arguing otherwise, but they literally teach you in middle school that having a billion different settings in such a short writing span is gonna get confusing. And obviously there are gonna be good writers who are exceptions, and can write an extremely fast paced story in less than 5 chapters, but this just isn’t one of them.
Bro the story is not complicated what about it is confusing to you
You sure talk big for someone who claims to have being taught this in middle school
Lmaoo you can’t even comprehend what I’m saying… I’m not arguing that the plot itself is complicated, all I said was I don’t like the fast pacing cuz it makes the story objectively confusing read. Are you just incapable of understanding that someone on the internet might have a different opinion to you?
Chill out. out all they're saying is that it's not oBjEcTiVeLy confusing lol obviously it cannot be objektive when minds differ on it
Girl you’re the one who started pulling the “middle school comprehension card on me” and now youre mad cause i answered you on the same note? The audacity. “Are you incapable of understanding that someone on the internet might have a different opion” thats rich coming from you. You literally jumped me because i disagreed with you? Fucking hypocrate.
DO YOU have comprehension skills? I never said YOU thought the story was complicated. I just said it is NOT complicated and has nothing to be confused about.
Lmaoo ur all so mad for what?? When did I “jump” you? do you think that everyone expressing an opinion online is secretly out to get you or smth am I not allowed to criticise a story’s pacing? Am I not allowed to be confused or dislike the way an author presented something? It’s not a crime to suggest that a story would benefit from having more chapters … and I really don’t give a fuck if you wanna dick ride the author cuz I’m ngl I don’t even remember what story this is under, cuz you’ve dragged it out for so fucking long
I simply dissgreed with you at first and YOURE the ond who got pissed darling. Dont try to pull the uno reverse here, read your own comments before replying. This has only been dragged for so long because YOU keep replying. Stop answering if that bothers you
I’m confused what language is that?
Brazilian Portuguese
Wait I’m stupid why are they speaking Portuguese
well the song yeah
because seungmin lived in brazil when he was younger
Ohhh ok that makes sense
There’s no way anyone actually likes Amon….
Frrr I feel like they are trying to please him cuz they are really scared of him
Just started reading but is it just me or does the author really not know how to set the mood… they just started randomly making out for no reason
"Ideas and a dream, the rest is up to u" ahh author LMAOAOOAOA
Wasn’t this fuck ass doctor the one who said to have unprotected sex or am I trippin?? And Fym the partner needs to be notified what bs
That doctor has to be from some sort of fertility cult or something fishy. Because at that point they should be going to a different doctor to get a 2nd opinion and not whatever this quack is.
At this point I don’t even think they’re gonna get together he really don’t gaf I’m crine